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   Research Paper Guide
 Research is formalized curiosity; it is poking and prying with a purpose.  

     Zora Neale Hurston

Choosing a Topic

    1. Select a topic that interests you
    2. Select a topic that can be researched with reasonable thoroughness
    3. Formulate a thesis question around which your research will be centered and focused.
    4. As you gather information, your thesis will "write itself."

Two characteristics of a working thesis:

    1. It is fine-tuned (not too broad)
    2. It is limited enough to make it manageable

Too Broad: Abuse

More Specific: Child abuse

Thesis Questions: Is child abuse a myth of reality? What laws protect our children? Who are the victims and perpetrators? What is being done to combat abuse? What are the types of child abuse? Where does abuse occur?

Working Thesis: More must be done in homes, schools, and daycare centers to protect our children from sexual abuse, physical abuse and neglect.

Too Broad: Psychology

More Specific: ADD

Research Questions: What is ADD? What causes ADD? What treatments are recommended? What are the effects?

Thesis Questions: How should parents identify and treat a child having ADD?

What treatments for ADD show the most promise?

Are herbal treatments best for ADD sufferers?

Working Thesis: A combination of herbal remedies, behavior modification and therapy is the best way to treat ADD in terms of safety, efficacy and long-range benefits.

Too broad: Education

More Specific: Bilingual Education

Research Questions: What is bilingual education? Where is there bilingual education? What are the laws concerning bilingual education?

How effective is it? How do students having received bilingual education fare in the long run compared to other?

Thesis Question: Is bilingual education in our high schools in the best interest of our children?

Working Thesis: Bilingual education in high school is doing a disservice to our students and to the taxpayers


Typing/Writing Note Cards

Note cards may be in the form of a quotation, a paraphrase, or a summary.

* Quotation: An exact repetition of words.

When quoting make sure that what you copy is word for word.

Put quotation marks around all quoted material.

This way you will know for sure when you are writing your report that material should go in quotes.

* Paraphrase: A restatement of a passage into your own words.

Taking notes on a paragraph or a few paragraphs and write them in your own words.

* Summary: A brief restatement of major point or facts of a larger portion of writing.

Taking notes in our own words on the entire article – giving main ideas.

Turn article over and write from memory.


Helpful Suggestions for writing Note Cards

  • Each note card must contain only one point.
  • Take notes one source at a time.
  • Put letter in the top left.(Letters correspond to sources on your Works Cited cards)
  • Put # on the top right. (optional - to keep track of your cards)
  • Put page # on bottom .
  • Cards may be word processed or hand-written.
  • (Internet sources may not have page #. If there is a paragraph # write that ; if not, write no page for your own reference, so that you know you didn't forget about it.)

 

The Beauty of Note Cards

  • They provide you with an easy way to keep track of information you may use in your report.
  • They allow you to easily group related material from differing sources. Titles on note cards simplify the grouping of related materials.
  • They allow you the flexibility of grouping cards in various organizational patterns, until you find a pattern that best suits the needs of your paper.

Three Sample note cards from source A (time.com)

A Biggest Benefit 1

"The biggest benefit may be the creation of greater lean body mass, which burns calories more efficiently and keeps weight in check."    

No page

 

A Wt. Training Benefits 2

Weight training is good for heart, lungs, muscle mass, & good-looking body. It is increasingly recommended for hear patients, but in moderation.

No page

 

A Weight Training 3

Weight training is a great exercise

 

No page

One paragraph of your report may look as follows:

Weight training improves the heart. Experts once thought that only calisthenics could strengthen the heart. Current research indicates this is not true. Janice Horowitz writes of the benefits of weight training: "The biggest benefit may be the creation of greater lean body mass, which burns calories more efficiently and keeps weight in check."    

Work Cited

Horowitz, Janice M. "All Pumped Up." Time 6 Mar. 2000. 13 Mar. 2000

<http://www.time.com/time/personal/2000228/healthhtml>. 

 


Incorporating Quotes and Paraphrases..........................4

In- Text Citations

All borrowed information that is not common knowledge must be documented.

Ideally, the author and the page number must be cited.

Weight training is recommended because it creates "greater lean body mass, which burns calories more efficiently and keeps weight in check" (Horowitz 71).

When the author is not mentioned in the essay itself, the author’s name must be included in parentheses after the quote or paraphrase. If the page # is known, include it after the name. There is NO comma and there is NO p. pp. before the

page #. The period goes after the parentheses

Janice Horowitz writes, "The biggest benefit may be the creation of greater lean body mass, which burns calories more efficiently and keeps weight in check"  (71).  

When quotes are introduced with the he said/she said, or with similar expressions that indicate a pause, include a comma before the quotation.

The first time a name is introduced in an essay, include both the first & last name.

According to the Web article entitled "All Pumped Up," weight training creates "greater lean body mass, which burns calories more efficiently and keeps weight in check."  

When including articles from the Web which have no author, refer to the title of the Web page. Usually papers are easier to read and flow more smoothly when the title is inserted within the essay rather than in parentheses. If there is no page #, obviously none can be inserted in parentheses.

Janice Horowitz compares the benefits of weight training versus conventional exercise programs. She explains that traditional exercises do not benefit the body in as many ways as does weight training. The greatest benefit to weight training is that it keeps one’s weight down (71).

Paraphrasing:

Paraphrased material must be cited in the same format as quoted material. Include the author and page # when known.

The current trend is to include the author’s name in the essay itself, rather than in parentheses.

Janice Horowitz writes of the benefits of weight training: "The biggest benefit may be the creation of greater lean body mass, which burns calories more efficiently and keeps weight in check"  (71).  

 

When an independent clause (complete sentence) introduces a quotation, a colon is generally used.

When the author is introduced in the body of the paper, do not repeat the name in parentheses.

When the page # is known, include it in parentheses before the period.

INCORRECT DROPPED QUOTE

Weight training is great. "The biggest benefit may be the creation of greater lean body mass" (7l). We should try it.

INCORRECT DROPPED QUOTE

Never DROP A QUOTE as a full sentence. Always introduce a quote. A comma or colon should precede a quote.

Note: Barnet & Bedau in Current issues and Enduring Questions write, "Quotations should occupy no more than 10 or 15 percent of your paper" (208).


 

Research Paper Format

1. Topic: must be approved by instructor & related to readings from text

2. Spacing: double

3, Font size: 12 or 10.

4. Font Type: Easy-to-read font like Arial, Times New Roman, or Courier

5. Pagination: Upper right-hand corner l/2 inch down -your last name is followed by page #.

Do not include commas or periods.

Start numbering with page 1.

5. Margins: Leave a margin of between l" and 1˝ inches on all sides of the page

  1. Title Page: MLA format does not require a title page
  2. MLA Format: Research paper must conform to all MLA specifications with one exception: The thesis statement and topic sentences be in bold print.
  3. My Additional Requirements: A minimum of 6 sources & 6 pages of text..

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First Page of Paper

 
 

Layout of First Page- When No Cover Page is Used

Everything is double-spaced. There is no extra spacing after the page number , date, or title of the paper

 

 

Smith 1

John Smith

Professor Walkup, 5 English 111

15 May 2000

Bilingual Education: A Disservice to Students and Taxpayers

When my grandparents immigrated into this country from France, life was

difficult. They had little money and did not speak English……………..

Margins are at least one inch but no greater than 1 ˝ inch all around

 

 

 

SAMPLE FIRST PAGE

 

Should you prefer including a traditional cover page, use the following format:

 

 

 

 

Bilingual Education: A Disservice to Students and Taxpayers

By

John Smith

 

 

 

Professor Walkup

English 111

May 15, 2001

 

 

 

 

When using a cover page, the first written page of your report should look as follows:

 

 

 

 

Smith 1

 

Bilingual Education: A Disservice to Students and Taxpayers

When my grandparents immigrated into this country from France, life was difficult. They had little money and did not speak English…………….............

 

 

 

 


Documenting Electronic Sources (Works Cited)

Abbreviate all months except for May, June and July.

(Jan., Feb., Mar., Apr., May, June, July, Aug., Sept., Oct., Nov., Dec.)

If a URL must be divided, treat it only after a slash. Do not add a hyphen at the break.

Electronic Sources:

  • CD-ROM
  • E-Mail
  • Online Magazine
  • Online Newspaper
  • Personal and Professional Sites
  • World WideWeb

CD-ROM

Smith, John. "Investing on the Internet." Los Angeles Times 4 May 1999: A3. CDNewsBank. CD-ROM. NewsBank. May 2000.

For material published in print that you have obtained on a CD-ROM, start by citing the article in the standard format, and then add the following:

*Title of the database, underlined

*The publication medium (CD-ROM, diskette..)

*Name of vendor

*Electronic publication

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E-Mail

Smith, John. "Censorship of Essays." E-Mail to A. Rosa. 11 Nov. 1999.

*Start with the author's name (or alias or screen name) , & if there is a subject line, include that in

quotation marks.

*Next type the designation "E-mail to" followed by the name of the person to
whom the E-mail is addressed, and the date of the message.

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Online Magazine

Eskenazi, Michael. "G.I. Blues in Black and White." Time 24 Nov. 1999. 24 Nov.

1999 <http://pathfinder.com/time/interstitials/inter.html>.

Provide information in the following order:
*Author -last name first - a period after first name
*Title of article - in quotes - place a period inside the quotation marks

Note: If the title of the article is a question, include the question mark inside the quotation mark
and do not include a period. "What Can You Do to Promote Cultural Mainstreaming?"

*Title of magazine underlined - with no punctuation following it.
*Date of online magazine followed by a period
*Date you accessed the magazine - no punctuation follows the year
*URL address - in angle brackets. A period follows the closing angle bracket.

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Documenting Electronic Sources – Continued

Online Newspaper

Copage, Eric. "Tables are Waiting on the Internet." New York Times on the Web

24 Nov. 1999. 25 Nov. 1999
<h
ttp://www.nytimes.com/library/tech/99/11/biztech/articles/24reserve.html>.

Provide the following information in the following order, when available:
*Author (last name first with a period after first name)
*Title of article - in quotation marks with a period before the closing quotation mark.
*Name of magazine underlined
*Date of newspaper followed by a period
*Date you read the article (no period or punctuation after the year)
*URL address - in angle brackets - followed by a period after the angle brackets

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Personal and Professional Sites

Scorch, M. Welcome to Gran Gran's Graphics. 21 Nov. 1999

<http://home.att.net/~scorh2/>.

Smith, John. Homepage. 29 Nov. 1999. 30 Nov. 1999

<http://members.tripod.com/smith>.

Include available information in the following order:
*Start with the creator of the site (not the editor or compiler )- last name first followed by

a period
*Type the title of the site, project, or database, & underline it.
*If there is no title, write a brief description, such as Homepage - but do not underline

Homepage.
*Editor or compiler of the project or database
*Latest date on site followed by a period
*Your access date
*URL address in angle brackets. A period follows the angle brackets.

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World Wide Web

Smith, John. "Cloning and the Insurance Industry." Electronic Genetics Newsletter.

29 Nov. 1999. 30 Nov. 1999

http://www.westpub.com/Educate/matchsci/insure.htm>.

Include the following information, if available, in the following order:
*Author's name
*Title of the cited material in quotation marks
*Title of the complete work underlined (or italicized)
*Publication date
*Date of access
*URL address in angle brackets, all followed by a period.


Documenting Other Sources (Works Cited)

  • Book with one author
  • Book with two authors
  • Book with Corporate Author
  • Book: Selection from an anthology, collection, or critical edition.
  • Magazines and Journals
  • Newspapers
  • A Personal Interview
  • A Personal letter
  • A Sound Recording

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Book with one author
Doe, John J. Writing Strategies. New York: Harper, 1999.
Author Book Underlined Location Abbreviated Publisher Year Period
Name Reversed

Book with two authors

Doe, John J. and Jane Smith. Writing Strategies. New York: Harper, 1999.
Type the authors’ names in the order in which they are given on the book’s title page.
(The names are not necessarily in alphabetical order. Reverse the name of the first author only,
putting the last name first.

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Book with Corporate Author

Association for the Advancement of English. Writing Strategies. New York: Harper, 1999.
Bank of Boston. Automated Banking. Boston: Bank of Boston, 1999.
A Corporate author would be listed on the title page The name of the corporate author may be the
same as the publisher’s name. Companies, groups, associations... are considered "authors."

Book: Selection from an anthology, collection, or critical edition.

Brown, Jane. "The Winning Introduction." Writing for Success. Ed. James Smith. New York: Harper, 1999.
Many English students find themselves quoting short stories for an anthology or essays that have been
compiled by an editor.
Start with the authors’ name & then put quotation marks around the short story or essay. Then put the title
of the book underlined, followed by Ed for editor.
Additional example

Chopin, Kate. "The Story of an Hour." Literature: An Introduction to Fiction, Poetry, and Drama. Ed.

X. J. Kennedy and Dana Gaoia. New York: Harper Collins, 1999. 373-75.

 

Chopin, Kate. "The Story of an Hour." Current Issues & Enduring Questions. Ed. Sylvan Barnet and

Hugo Bedau. 5th ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 1999. 360-362.

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Magazines

Monthly journal or magazine, pagination by issue
Smith, John Joseph. " Three Great Writers that Shaped the Nation." Smithsonian Nov. 1999: 10l-104.

Smith, John. "Three Great Writers that Shaped the Nation." Journal of Basic Writing 5.l (1999) 24-37.

When each issue of the journal is numbered separately, include both the volume & issue number.
Put a period after the volume number and write the issue number right after the period, so 5.1
indicated volume 5, issue 1.

 

 

DOCUMENTING OTHER SOURCES - CONTINUED

Weekly or biweekly journal or magazine

Saporito, Bill. "Wrestling With Your Conscience." Time 15 Nov. 1999: 72-74.
Saporito, Bill. "Wrestling With Your Conscience." Time 15 Nov. 1999: 72+.
"Wrestling With Your Conscience." Time 15 Nov. 1999: 72-74.
For weekly or biweekly magazines include the day, the month and the year, followed by a colon
and the page numbers.
When pages are not consecutive in a magazine, include the plus sign.
When there is no author, start with the title of the article in quotes.

Newspapers

Daily Newspaper
Smith, John. "Censoring Writing." New York Times 5 Dec. 1999, nat. ed.: B1.


Unsigned article
"Censoring Writing." New York Times 5 Dec. 1999, nat. ed.: B1.

An Editorial
"Censoring Writing." Editorial. Norwich Bulletin 30 Nov. 1999: C3.
Doe, Jane. "Censoring Writing." Editorial. Boston Globe 30 Nov. 1999: C3.

Letter to an editor
Smith, John. Letter. Norwich Bulletin 1 Nov. 1999: C3.
Smith, John. Letter. New York Times 1 Nov. 1999, late ed.: A18.
Do not include the article (The, A, or An) before the title of the paper.
When the edition is included in the newspaper’s masthead, include it.
For editorials, provide the name of the author when known.

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A Personal Interview
Doe, John. Personal interview. 1 Dec. 1999.
To cite an interview that you conducted, indicate the name of the person you interviewed (spoke with).
Then write the designation "Personal interview."
this is followed by the date of the interview.

A Personal letter
Smith, John. Letter to the author. 22 Dec. 1999.

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A Sound Recording
Scarlatti, Domenico. Keyboard Sonatas. Andras Schiff, piano. London, 1999

Jones, John. Interview with John Smith. Audiocassette. Columbia: American Audio Prose Library, 1999.

List the following:
* Author or composer
* The title of the work
* Names of the artists
* The production company
* The date
If the medium is not a compact disc, indicate Audiocassette, Audiotape, or LP before the name of the
production company.


 

Sample Works Cited Page

 

  • Double space the entire page.
  • Include no extra spacing after the words "Works Cited" or between entries.
  • Entries are in alphabetical order
  • The first line of each entry is at the left. Subsequent lines are indented 1/2inch (for 5 spaces).

 

 

Smith 8

 

Works Cited

Doe, Jane. "Censoring Writing." Editorial. Boston Globe 30 Nov.
     1999: C3.

Doe, John. Personal interview. 1 Dec. 1999.

Smith, Joan "Cloning and the Insurance Industry." Electronic

Genetics Newsletter. 29 Nov. 1999. 30 Nov. 1999

     http://www.westpub.com/Educate/matchsci/insure.htm>.

Smith, John. "Censoring Writing." New York Times 5 Dec. 1999,

     nat. ed.: B1.

Smith, Richard. Writing Strategies. New York: Harper, 1999.

 

 

 

Note: Most authors and titles of articles in this handout are fictitious.

Abbreviate all months except for May, June and July.

(Jan., Feb., Mar., Apr., May, June, July, Aug., Sept., Oct., Nov., Dec.)

If a URL must be divided, treat it only after a slash. Do not add a hyphen at the break.

GOOD LUCK!